Yhtomit

Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: England
Job: Creative Design

I successfully got through the portal for the first time 17/9/06. I now have 8 collabs I'm co-authored in, 6 random shorts, 4 music videos, and 7 "Shortened Shakespeare" flash.

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Score: 10
Independent Life

"Wow."

submission: Independent Life
date: August 31, 2009

This is really good. I gotta say, I wasn't expecting it to be in Russian (probably shoulda read the Author Comments first :P), but it's still a good flash. And I agree with MadAsHell, it does remind me of Edd. (Go on series and see "Edd's World", I think it's called)
But yeh, good job, and I'm looking forward to more of these.

August 31, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think Edd looks like Derek, but my style is other :-)

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Score: 10
DARE

"I didn't know how you could improve on the orginal"

submission: DARE
date: August 12, 2009

Thanks for showing me. Man, this is so brilliant, amazing animation, style, message, I mean, I remember the storyline from Squeakytoad's original version of this video, but you have seriously done it justice with this remake. Well done, mate. Absolutely amazing stuff, and it would be an injustice if this didn't get atleast a daily award. Bravo.

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Score: 10
[Frontier Psychiatrist]

"This is the 3rd time someone has animated this..."

date: July 30, 2009

... but the first time that someone did the whole thing, and you did it pretty darn well. Good solid animation throughout, cool visual gags, nice work all round. Thanks for letting me know how that song ends. :)

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Score: 10
Flash Api Ads Tutorial

"Thanks. :)"

date: June 26, 2009

Thanks for the walkthrough on it, to help those who haven't quite worked it out.

Graphics wise, which in this case, I guess, only refers to the menu, not bad, but I don't know that it quite fits with the music. But anyway, good tutorial.

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Score: 7
Josh Howley: Tree Hugger

"I lol'd."

date: June 13, 2009

Not bad. I gotta say it was quite funny, and I like how you customised your stickman, rather than having just a plain one, it makes it slightly better.
Just a few pointers. When he's walking, make him move up and down, rather than having a single simple tween. It gives him the sort of up and down movement you get when walking in real life. And also, you need a preloader. The one at the moment only lasts until it passes judgement, and a preloader helps make your flash look better before people have even watched it, giving you a better score. And finally, even though you did customise your stickman, unless you good at animating them soon, it's probably better that you start trying out learning to animate full body characters.
Hope the advice helped, nice work with this flash, and keep animating. :)

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

danke ^_^

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Score: 7
Bueno Nacho Ad

"Not bad. :)"

submission: Bueno Nacho Ad
date: June 13, 2009

The animation and movement of characters was of a fair quality, the music fitted well, and the backgrounds were very well drawn, but there's definitely room for improvement.
Biggest improvement needed is definitely a preloader. You can download them from Newgrounds, look just above the Audio Portal/Games buttons. Other than that, you could also use a bit of improvement on lip syncing, and the writing at the end could use a bit of formatting, adjusting the layout and size, just to make it look better.
But yeh, nice work here. Keep animating. :)

June 13, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.
About the preloader: since I made this to play in the hallway TVs at my school my teacher did not want a play button because it had to play automatically. I uploaded it anyway without any buttons but I'll probably find some time at school to change it and then upload it again.

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Score: 6
Flash vs Flash

"Not bad."

submission: Flash vs Flash
date: June 13, 2009

I'm guessing you're relatively new to flash, and recently watched Animator vs Animation, but still, fair animation for a beginner. Keep practising, and it's probably a good idea to move away from sticks, and you'll get better, no doubt. I think you should probably smooth out the lines a bit, perhaps use a thinner brush, and it would look better.

Keep animating.

June 14, 2009

Author's Response:

thank you

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Score: 10
The Tempest in 60 seconds

"Nice."

date: May 30, 2009

Good animation. I gotta say, it's probably better than my own version, which I only managed to get down to 94 seconds, rather than the 60 you got it to. Although the starting 4 or 5 seconds seemed awfully similar. But that's probably because it's the same play.

Anyways, good voice acting, good animation, good style, and just a good summary of the play overall.

May 30, 2009

Author's Response:

Ha, I actually re watched yours straight after I submitted this. Aw, yours is the original man. I love it. Even though you did cheat without having Alonso's story >:)

Ty for the review. *Watches your others*

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Score: 10
Pokemon Hunter

"Wow."

submission: Pokemon Hunter
date: May 11, 2009

That was really awesome. I think there's a Weekly Award in the pipeline here. Seriously, why hasn't Nintendo hired you yet?
But give us a lil more time to read descriptions. That's my only criticism.

May 11, 2009

Author's Response:

right click play dude ;)

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Score: 9
2nd Annual Tank Awards

"Cool."

date: March 7, 2009

Well done to everyone who won, you can't say they didn't deserve it.
And Tom, nice, funny presentation. Tell you what you should do next year.

You should do what you did this year, except it's real, live, awards ceremony with the nominees there if they can be there, and NG staff presenting the awards along side you, and awesome stuff like that. Then you just video that, edit it as quick as possible, and post it up here. That would be completely awesome in almost every imaginable way. Just an idea though.

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